Hello. This is looking almost complete. A couple of bits of feedback to make it even better: If we look at the digipak cover first - I can't read the dedications - because I can't get the image bigger on my screen and so you'll need to carefully check the spellings here (you'll lose marks if you have spelling errors). The CD itself needs to have an edge to it - a rim around it and around the inside hole (take a look at a real CD to see what i mean). This will make it seem like a real CD rather than a circle on a page. The advert: can you put a border around the image of the front panel to make it stand off the page a bit? Otherwise it's not clear that it is the front panel. I would also suggest that you make the image straight rather than slanted - but this is your choice. R
Hello. This is looking almost complete. A couple of bits of feedback to make it even better: If we look at the digipak cover first - I can't read the dedications - because I can't get the image bigger on my screen and so you'll need to carefully check the spellings here (you'll lose marks if you have spelling errors). The CD itself needs to have an edge to it - a rim around it and around the inside hole (take a look at a real CD to see what i mean). This will make it seem like a real CD rather than a circle on a page. The advert: can you put a border around the image of the front panel to make it stand off the page a bit? Otherwise it's not clear that it is the front panel. I would also suggest that you make the image straight rather than slanted - but this is your choice. R
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